The Appointment
- Bookrix 2012 Flash Fiction 3rd Place Award!
- NPR Weekend Edition "Three Minute Fiction" Submission, Round 7 -
(Prompt: Submissions must have a character come to town and someone leave town. Each piece of writing has to be read in less than three minutes, so no longer than 600 words.
More info at: http://www.npr.org/series/105660765/three-minute-fiction)
Here's a link to the NPR Round 7 Winners program:
http://www.npr.org/player/v2/mediaPlayer.html?action=1&t=1&islist=false&id=142264396&m=1422750433
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“Jack, did you say?
You're probably asking for me. John Wilson. Right there – line
number 7. What's that? No, sorry, don't know him. Not personally,
anyway. He disappeared about 6 months ago, from what I've heard. The
same day I arrived in town, as a matter of fact.
“I look a lot like him?
Yeah, I get that a lot. That gets pretty annoying sometimes, let me
tell you! By all accounts he was a loser. How do I know? I looked
into it a bit. He had the same dead-end job for 25 years. Nervous,
hypertensive type. Didn't have many friends. And those he did have
were anchored to the same row of barstools every night.
“It ended up costing him
his family. Lost his wife to another man for a while, I hear. Kids
wouldn't talk to him. And according to his brother, he didn't fight
for them. Hard not to hate a guy like that.
“Sorry? Clipboard? Sure.
Here you are. All the information's correct. Anything else you need?
Oh, right. Here's my insurance card.
“That Jack was a case,
that's for sure. Can't say it's a bad thing, though. It's worked out
pretty well for me. I applied for a job at the same company. I'd
never take that same job Jack had, of course. Accounting's a real
bore. But they've had some openings recently in customer service.
Turns out I'm pretty suited to it. Yeah, I like people. Everyone I've
met in town since I arrived has been really nice. Well, with the
exception of some of Jack's old friends. They've been pretty cool to
me, even suspicious. Maybe I just remind them of Jack too much. I
guess that would freak me out a little, too. Someone you know just
disappears in a flash, and someone you've never met shows up looking
just like him. One guy even told me it's like I'm a 'body snatcher'
or something. I noticed he avoided me at Mel's Diner after that.
That's OK. You can't be everyone's ice cream flavor, can you? Live
and let live, I say. Kinda have to in a small town, right?
“What's that? Oh, thanks.
Don't want to forget the card. I still have to be careful with
things. I tend to lose them a lot. Yes, it's getting a lot better,
though. Thanks for asking.
“Hey, you know what
shocked me the most? It's what Jack left behind. I've met that wife
of his. Yes, Sarah - the one he abandoned. She's a knockout! Oh,
that's right, you've met her. Did you know we started dating
recently? I can't for the life of me imagine why he left her. She's
got plenty of virtues worth sticking around for. And I plan to. Oh,
stop laughing. You know what I mean. And it's not just her looks.
Sarah's sister was just joking that I killed off Jack so I could take
his place. Maybe I did.
“Her kids are pretty
amazing, too. I've been able to step in and help out a bit. Went to
Karen's volleyball tournament last week. I'll probably be up to
attending Jim's football game in Smithville next week. That is, if
everything checks out with the doctor today.
“He's ready? Great.
“Good to see you again,
Doc! Yes, sir, I'm doing well. The speech and occupational therapy
ended 2 months ago. Yes, really. How long's it been altogether? Well,
tomorrow it'll be six months since the stroke. All in all? I feel
like a new man.”
4 comments :
Love the "Like" button! Oh, and the story, of course!
I love this!
Thanks, Judy!
Kind of you to like BOTH...
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